יש פה דוברי אנגלית שיכולים להגיד לי אם מה שכתבתי זה תקין?

אני לא כלכך טובנ באנגלית אז אני לא יודעת אם מה שכתבתי הוא נכון אשמח לעזרה (:


there's a part of me that wants to forget.
forget that I even met you, forget how much I loved you, forget how you made me feel.
but there is another part inside of me deep down that wants to hold onto the beautiful memories we created together and in things that belongs only to the two of us,
i want to remember how your hugs used to feel, but I want to forget how much I miss them,
I want to remember how it felt when I looked straight into your eyes, but I want to forget how hard it is now to just see nothing through your beautiful colored eyes
I want to remember how you made me feel so loved back then, and I want to forget how hated you make me feel now
I want to forget you. I want to forget how much you meant to me. I want to forget how it feels to love you this much, I deserve better than you even though I don't think there is better than you, you make me feel so confused so loved and so hated at the same time
why can't I get you out of my mind? I don't want you here
I want you as far away as possible but I want you to lie next to me as close as you can.
I wish I could say that I hate you but that's not true I love you with all my heart and I will always love you even if you don't