איך זה כתוב עד עכשיו? טוב או לא?

Keonho stands behind the door to the meeting room, his hands sweating from nervousness. He doesnt know what to say or how to act, He doesnt even know who is in that room yet.
This meeting would be the first time he will see who are the members of his future team, The four other boys who will work with him for a long time, who he will live with and theyll become a big part of his life.
Keonho opens the door and steps into the room.
He sees four other boys sitting around the table and a few staff members he had been introduced to before when training.
Hello he says and bows down to the people in the room before taking his seat at the table. He looks at the boys sitting with him. He had met them briefly before when he trained with all the trainees in the company, but now those are the only ones left, and will debut.
The boys were martin, seonghyeon, james and juhoon. Seonghyeon was the same age as him but keonho knew no more than that about the boys.
Good morning to all of you one of the staff at the table said with a smile. All the boys bowed a little and mumbled good morning back.
Im yoon seojun and i will be the manager of this group. Now can you all introduce yourself to everyone, please
He gestured his hand towards james, telling to go first.
Hello, im james. Im 18and i am from taiwannice to meet you all.