למי שמבין אנגלית.. הכתיבה נכונה?

So they disappointed you. they made you felt like you worth nothing. they throw you away like a piece of shit. you feel terrible and you starting to hate yourself. you blame yourself because of their departure. if so many people left so something wrong with you. you thinking that you are ugly, stupid and bad person. you makes yourself being the biggest monster in the world. you try to find the answer to the question "why did they left me?". you not going to ask them because they didn't want you in their life. you crying because of the frustration. then someone will tell you "they left because they understood that you're the best person that they ever mate. that they are not suitable for you. that you deserve more". and then you will think and find the answer that was there all time but you didn't notice. you will understand that they did for you a favor. they helped you to kick out your fake friends from your life. they show you their real faces. they made your life better.
30 בדצמבר 2018, 16:24
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wolf1234
^ שגיאות*
וכתיבה יפה.
B
BlueOcean
they made you feel**
they threw you away**
אם הם עשו את זה וזה נגמר הם הפסיקו.
אפשר throw אבל זה רק אם הם כל הזמן עושים את זה ועדיין עושים את זה.
and you've started*

if so many people left so there's must be something wrong with you - מה שכתבת זה לא טעות, פשוט זה נשמע יותר טוב.

you think**
you make yourself be* לא הבנתי בדיוק מה ניסית לכתוב שם, אבל תיקנתי.
youre** not going to**
כתבת רק you, צריך גם are.
youre crying*
why did they leave**
אם יש did כל המשפט הופך לעבר ולא צריך מילים בפועל עבר.

אין שגיאות כתיב, לעומת זאת יש שגיאות דקדוק.
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